Thinking about our body

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Do you think about sexy women and muscle man=>men?

The most=>most people say that "they have a good body" and "to try thier best for healthly".

In This=>these days, managing oneself became big issue. Therefore the person controling body was to increase=>to be increase.

many people among doing exercise does=>do more exercise for showing thiers then healthy.

I also exercised for showing when I was highschool and a military man and sometime I do.

but the exercising person should have more imformation about the body in order to exercise for healthy.

now I speak about useful thinks=>thinking.

first, usually we compare our body with to make building. But, it is so different.

The focus of building is frame. But body of human being is muscles trapping a bone.

Have you ever seen a large bridge trapped cable?

it have=>has strong cable.

If the cable wasn't strong, do you think that the bridge is safe?

in my opinion, the bridge isn't safe.

our body is same structure like to the bridge.

in addition to a bone is moving.

therefore, a muscle is similar with elastic cord.

How do we keep body?

of course We must to make a strong muscle.

For example, let's think about having one´s waist dislocated.

I have seen a person having a back pain during doing exercise.

The pain is caused that the muscle don't trap a bone well. And if they don't improves the muscle, it will become to appear again.

It is able to apply all our body.

being healthy isn't having a good body line.

the second topic is blood.

We think blood is same water. it is a wrong idea.

Blood have=>has many work during making around in blood vessle.

one of the blood's mission transfer the oxyzen to a cell.

have you ever stoped a breath during long time?

If you keep to stop, What do you happen?

it is same that a red blood cell supply a oxyzen to a cell.

therefore, a cell consisting our body is able to have a problem if it didn't supply oxyzen and arrived delay. In addition, the blood should be mixed well. But if the velocity of blood become slow the blood isn't mixed well and can't perform a role. it also cause a trouble.

in example, arteriosclerosis,

in short, don't slow the blood velocity.

I spoke two topic.

first, a bone is trapped from a muscle.

second, don't slow the blood velocity.

I have low ability of english. therefore I couldn't use many example.

If you have=>want a conversation with me I am always welcome=>I always welcome.

Thank you for lisening to my speech.

and I want to a brief question.

do you have a question?

during I don't think my body it have many works for me.

- rok's -